जब भी नजरें अपनी दौराता हूँ ..
देखता हूँ आसपास ..
ऩजर आती है मिटती संवेदनाएं
पराये होते लोग.. .
.अपने होते शहर ..!
शुक्रिया है भगवान आपका
की मुझे कोशो दूर तक दिखाई नहीं देता..
वर्ना फट पड़ता कलेजा मानव वाला
पराये होते लोग.. .
.अपने होते शहर ..!
मतलबी होते रिश्ते..
लुटता ममत्व
फफकते शिशु ...
पराये होते लोग.. .
.अपने होते शहर ..!
क्यूँ नहीं शहर से सबक लेते लोग..
शहर तो सबको अपनाता है एक समान..
पराये होते लोग.. .
.अपने होते शहर ..!
लेखक : दीपेश कुमार
Monday, May 17, 2010 |
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Good one. Dam hai baat me.......sablog selfish hote ja rahe hain bhai.........humanity, feelings, emotions kya hote hain bhul gaye hain shayad
Bahut sahi.....are aap to jabardast kavi nikle...Hume pata hi nahi tha...Good work...keep it up...u have potential to become a good poet i suppose.
thanks sir..will try to keep up the faith...!
wahh bahoot ache .. lines ache hai yaara ...
wah wah.. kya baat hay...itni choti is kavita me apne kya keh dala....
mast hai dost.......
Deepesh, i must say that...this piece is excellent...:)
you have capability to jump in to this...dont waste ur time in IT...HINDI JAGAT to tumhari jaroorat hai...just give a try...u will get recognition that is for sure... :)
Bahut sahi hai dear.. phod diye tum to.. Solid poem hai.. CSC ke magazine me bhej do post hone ke liye!!!!
nice one!
keep it up!
u r going to have one od the finest blogs! :-)
Thanks sir ... sayad ye kalpna bhi sach ho jaye.. :)
nice one...:)
one of the major fact of life....good one