Comments (8)

On January 29, 2010 at 11:28 AM , Deepesh Kumar said...

this is the newest edition to my list of poems.This is dedicated to my society and my culture.

 

On January 29, 2010 at 4:57 PM , rivakuvi said...

truly speaking i like it but kuch adhoorapan sa hai yaha .......
even word which you are using awesome ..word power is really strong here ....a hard fact

 

On January 29, 2010 at 7:07 PM , Deepesh Kumar said...

haan..kuch adhoorapan to hai..per kabhi kabhi sabd nahi milate..bhavanon se he kaam chalana padta hai :(

 

On January 30, 2010 at 12:19 PM , AK said...

I didn't understand some words..my bad hindi!!! But I got the overall feel and it seems to be pretty gud.. I also have a blog..come and visit sometimes...tc.

 

On February 1, 2010 at 6:06 AM , Rajeev Kumar Ranjan said...

Hi Deepesh, got time to read your lines...words are really good. But, if you are writing lines in HINDi,the way u write matters...as well spellings...eg-Ki has two meanings...it changes the whole meaning sometimes...do change it.

 

On February 1, 2010 at 10:08 AM , Deepesh Kumar said...

mm...absolutely sir..will take care next time..lill prblm with the editor too..not easy to handel :)

 

On February 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM , lawlesh said...

@DEEPESH......
it is very nice work man.........
keep it up...
you are now inching towards to write book (which contain only poem).......hahahahahahaha

 

On February 16, 2010 at 11:07 AM , ragini said...

REALLY GOOD ONE.....
one of d urs best...keep it up