अपनी हाथ की रेखाओं को
हमेशा
झुतालाता रहा हूँ मैं
कभी जीत को तो
कभी हार को
गले लगाता रहा
हूँ मैं
हर
हार को
जी
में बदलना जानता हूँ मैं
तकदीर
से भी आगे जाने
की
तमन्ना रखता हूँ मैं..!!!


लेखक :-
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Comments (14)

On January 21, 2010 at 12:10 PM , Deepesh Kumar said...

My new Creation..peculiar thing about this one is that the lines came into my mind when i was returning from my office [ csc @ chennai] and i note down the lines on a piece of a paper in front of a street lamp :) !

 
On January 21, 2010 at 12:19 PM , Alien Coders said...

Yeah yeah you were telling about it yesterday night only.......very innovative and very well said buddy.........aise hi thore hi na aap shabdo ke jaadugar hain...........

 
On January 21, 2010 at 12:25 PM , Deepesh Kumar said...

haaa..heeheheh,,bas sabdon ke jaal bunta rehta hoon..thanks for the appreciation mate :)

 
On January 21, 2010 at 1:57 PM , Unknown said...

nice work dude ...kep it up!!!

 
On January 21, 2010 at 10:11 PM , Rajeev Kumar Ranjan said...

Sapno ki duniya me swagat hai...dreamer.
Khwab aise sajana ki taqdeer ke liye kabhi tarasna na pade,
Jeena aise ki jane ke baad bhi tumhe khud pe hansna na pade...!!!

 
On January 22, 2010 at 6:43 PM , Subhash ki kavitaayen said...

Wow Good Blog and very good poem........keep it up.....when i read it.....It touched my heart...

 
On January 23, 2010 at 6:15 PM , ragini said...
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On January 23, 2010 at 6:16 PM , ragini said...

i just want to say one thng...plz extend ur poem up to a con sequencing level so that u get a big collection of that...that'll be really nice in future nd at that tym u wud like to publish that....again awesome....i liked that...dil ko chhoo gaya yaara.....

 
On January 25, 2010 at 12:41 PM , Ragini Chaubey said...

realy nice poem...

 
On January 27, 2010 at 10:34 AM , Unknown said...

hey deepesh!!u r amazing ya!!very very poetic&imaginative..best thing bout ur poems r tat they touch the heart.......hv no words to describe..simply speechless...but hats off man!!

 
On January 29, 2010 at 5:07 PM , rivakuvi said...

kool man but jhutalana spelling is little mysterious here ...i think it must be jhutlana well good man is behind this good work

 
On January 31, 2010 at 9:52 AM , Unknown said...

well gr8 poem yaar....... but it seems u jst stopped ur thoughts from flowing....... w8ing for some more......

 
On December 20, 2010 at 4:49 PM , Gurpreet said...

cannot stop myself from appraising such a simple and nice poem....

 
On December 25, 2010 at 4:22 AM , Unknown said...

its a good inspiration for everyone presented in very lucrative manner....:)